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Flat on my back all I can say is that I feel like all my bones in my body are broken. I can feel that all eyes are on me I'm laying there on the mats I'm looking up and i see that stupid stuffed goat how did i get here? let me tell you.
ReplyDeleteA stuffed goat? Awesome!
DeleteThe garden awoke without a sound.
ReplyDeleteOoh, I can't wait to find out more!
DeleteWolf Ridge was the kind of place that finds a permanent place in your brain forever.
ReplyDeleteYou totally captured the emotion! Great!
DeleteIt was just a deer yet we were all screaming
ReplyDeleteAAAAah! I can't wait to read the rest!
DeleteWithout a doubt, I knew it would happen and there was no stopping her.
ReplyDeleteI'm hooked!
DeleteWho would have thought the playground would have such a big effect on such little kids.
ReplyDeleteYes! Great job!
DeleteI didn't think I would be the kind of person who would be excited to get up at 4:00 in the morning.
ReplyDelete4 in the morning? It must be something good! Can't wait to find out!
DeleteWho would have thought that I, a first grader, could have a heart attack? Well I didn’t. But I’m sure for me, it did feel close to one…
ReplyDeleteHahahaha! (I'm sure it didn't feel funny at the time) :) This is great!
DeleteLong, looming, and terrifying, was the course that was stood in front of me.
ReplyDeletehey were you at the same place i was
DeleteLove your word "looming!" Can't wait to read the essay!
DeleteWhat has three legs and four eyes? Thats right, Maddie and I dashing through the finish line in the three legged race!
ReplyDeleteHaha! Just like Sara Jones and me!
DeleteI am 30 feet in the above the ground. People are telling me to go, but my legs are frozen. The sun is in my eyes. Do I dare take the step?
ReplyDeleteConnor! This is great!
DeleteWho would have thought that me out of all people would be chosen!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to find out the rest of the story!
DeleteWhen I heard her say my name, I felt like the world just stopped.
ReplyDeleteIt's like the Hunger Games... but I hope not! I'm intrigued!
DeleteI waited at the school entrance in anticipation...when would they get here?
ReplyDeleteSo great!
DeleteSmall, purple, and effective, the grape was the way to go.
ReplyDeleteMORGAN! I love this! I can't wait to read the rest of the essay!
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